I will cut myself!
Whohoho, this is so bad!
-The art in the scene
It's not worth even reviewing! Please, it's torture for my eyes!
-Reflections (Shells look transparent as GetAwkward said)
-Materials (Bullets look like they have no material, try increasing reflection amount a bit)
-Background, do you see it? Neither do I.
uh-oh.... someone is butt-hurt.
Tisk tisk, so petty.
Ahh only If I was able to do such a desgin... I'm perfect with rendering, but the modeling is killing me :|
P.S. Video sam da je panoniafox ostavio komentar na Srpskom (verovatno), odakle ste? :D
Shiny Room 001
I haven't noticed some really big mistakes, but I will try to interpret my opinion about this:
-Lamps are too shiny... Try reducing reflection amount.
-Vents look unrealistic, too much colors, don't they have some shadows? If they're in pipes, there should have been some shadows :\
-Boxes in the corner look like they have no shadows, please fix it somehow.
-Depth of field should have been added to this project totally.
Just an opinion, don't get upset. ;)
The poles are crisp, witch isn't realistic. It looks like a single box with a texture from the "old" 2000's games... The edges are exactly too sharp.
Unfinished background... Something is missing... Ground in the background! Let's say a car is on a tower... But again, there will be bits of mountains or buildings seen.
Car reflection looks unrealistic too. Not sure why, but it gives the car transparent look.
Windshield has a bad texture too... Maybe more reflection?\
I give it 7/10 because of:
-Several bad textures (For example, I can see pixels on the poles).
-Bad car reflection.
Maybe stronger reasons to give a worse rating, but I give it a good rating because of modeling effort.
The modeling is good, but where are the shadows?! Try adding a shadow next time, it looks more realistic with shadows... In fact, it's one of the key components to creating a good work. ;)
It could've had better materials, better render, everything! And models aren't really the best. This is not fair :\ I have some works posted few weeks ago and nobody even rated... Weird! All tho, an average work, I like it. BUT, I had to take 3 stars because of:
- Bad Materials (Including no background)
- Bad render (depends a part from materials)
- Bad Models (Don't be lazy and use standard primitive objects! Be creative, edit them! Use modifiers!)
Teach me then...cause god knows i can't do this self taught crap...
also have you reviewed my other works?
1. O.O LES PAUL...
2. OHH IT'S 3D
2. Yeah... um, still I'd prefer a real one :P
It would've been "4" times better if you just replaced the materials :\ But I like it! :)
Nice work :)
Yes, I'm having in mind it's old as bible. Things I CAN notice:
- Shadows are somehow weird.
- Materials suck!
Now, I just feel something's wrong, but I cant get it... Good luck with your new works man.
Very nice, precise model... I wonder, what techniques (or modifiers) did you use to make this?
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